Hello.
I had read your review on my animation.
Your words made me realize that skill will come with time.

Anyway, because you helped me out, I decided that I should return the favor.

Overal, I found the song fairly decent.
I'm not a music expert, but I found that the rapid snare drum parts felt a little off.
I don't know if it's because it's slightly too loud, or just doesn't belong or if it needs something to go along with it.
During the rapid drum parts, it feels that there should be an emphasis, more emotion. Meaning it feels like there should be something to create depth.

Other than that, the song was pretty good.

I rate this 3/5 stars.